Wednesday, October 22, 2014

A blood Story

The blood story

Running around the front of the house playing blind mans bluff were my friends and brothers. It was my 7th birthday and we were having a great time. I was the one with the blindfold on. I almost tagged Jono who was being a bit smart and rude.I heard someone by the wall I started running. I was running in the wrong direction. Thats when dad looked away to talk. I ran straight into the stone wall. I hit my head and fell to the ground. Tears filled my eyes as dad ran over to lift me up. Jono ran inside to get mum and the rest of the adults out to see what was happening. Dad carries me into the house. Mum call’s the doctor because there was blood dripping all over my face like a vampire.   

Dad and the rest of the party stayed at home while mum and I went to the Medical center. My head was still very sore so mum brought a towel to stop the blood from pouring out.  When we were at the Hastings medical center we called in to the reception for my sheet. Dad txt mum to say that the other kids are eating the food so she gave me 2 chocolate bars and a drink. At least they didn’t eat the cake.

Friday, October 17, 2014

What's The Big Idea

What’s the big idea?
WALT summarise
Text: Bush walk  Author: Feana Tu'a koi

Read the text and record key words/phrases that answer these questions:

Who? Mr B, Rosie, Jase, TY, Mele

What? They were walking in the bush, when Mr B falls and hits his head on the ground hard which causes it to blead pretty hard.  The rest of the kids try to help.  

Where? About 45 minutes east of the ranger station, on waterfall track in Rimunui Forest.

When? Present day.

Why? Mr B tripped and falls on the ground.

How? Mr B tripped and fell on the ground.

Summarise the text in 25 words
(Include key words from the text as well as your words)


The best part of me

On the bottom of me is where I keep them, I see them not to tall but they are fast. They are a bit white but not to white.  They are muscular in all parts, also my heels can hold them up when I lie down.

They help me with a variety of things such as Biking, Running, Swimming and Walking. It also helps me with getting around. If I didn’t have control of my legs I might be walking up to bed but my legs take me to the bathroom

These creatures affect other people when I run past them in a game of rugby. They also affect other people when I chase people and tackle them.

I would never trade my legs even for $10000 billion because I like them the way they are.
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